My Bicycle.

I want to talk about riding bike. I ride it almost every night. After I learned how to ride two wheels-bike, I got more excitement. My bike is six years old now, but it goes well like a new one. Also, while I was in New York, my dad bought me a flash light to make bright at night, while I'm riding it. The flash light can control, when I push the button, it lights up. When I push it again, then it gets more brighter. For last, when I push it again it flicks. It's the coolest light that I have ever seen before.

Hi [이름]! It was so nice to meet you tonight. Just continue sending notes to the composition board. Here are your corrections. -Teacher JM   I want to talk about riding bike. >>>I want to talk about a riding bike.I ride it almost every night. >>>correct. (Better>>>I take a ride on it almost every night.)After I learned how to ride two wheels-bike, I got more excitement. >>>After I learned how to ride a bike, I got more excited. (note: a bike automatically has 2 wheels)My bike is six years old now, but it goes well like a new one. >>>Correct^^Also, while I was in New York, my dad bought me a flash light to make bright at night, while I'm riding it. >>>While I was in New York, my dad bought me a flash light to brighten my path whenever I'm riding the bike at night. The flash light can control, when I push the button, it lights up. >>>The flash light can be controlled. When I push the button, it would light up.When I push it again, then it gets more brighter. >>>And when I push the button again,the light gets brighter.For last, when I push it again it flicks. >>>For last press of the button, the light would flick.It's the coolest light that I have ever seen before. >>>Correct^^