My biggest challenge this year

2022-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My biggest challenge this year is to start acting. Because my dream is to be an actress and I am learning acting while going to academy to make my dreams come true. I want to work hard and achieve my dream

강사 첨삭

Hi Chloe!  

I hope that you reach your dreams in the future. Just work hard. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

My biggest challenge this year is to start acting. 
>>CORRECT

Because my dream is to be an actress and I am learning acting while going to academy to make my dreams come true. 
>> My dream is to be an actress and I am learning acting while going to an academy to make my dreams come true. 

I want to work hard and achieve my dream
>> CORRECT

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