My biggest concern about the futres
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Hi there [이름]!
You are right, as long as we are alive there\'s hope and we should do whatever we\'d like to do. Good luck with your new book! i hope I could read it someday in English.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I have been a journalist life for thirty years since 1988.
>> I have been a journalist for thirty years.
OR>> I have been a journalist since 1988.
I have met lots of people, had been lots of experiences, and had visited lots of places.
>> correct!
It has become my various property and value.
>> It has become my property and wealth.
Now, I will not be long to have my job.
>> Now, it won\'t be long until I say goodbye to this job.
OR>> After a few years, I\'ll retire from this job.
It maybe will last only 5 or 6 years.
>> It may last only for 5 or 6 years.
Maybe I can keep it for about ten years.
>> correct!
Anyway, I need to prepare for my future now.
>> correct!
I must begin my secondly life in safety after retired.
>> I must begin my second life in safety after retirement/retiring.
I have written two books until now.
>> I have written two books now.
The title of the first book is \'The temptation of the old road, Be desirous of history\'.
>> correct!
The title of the second book is \'The reason why I walk\'.
>> correct!
I am ready for the third book.
>> correct!
I\'m choosing a publishing company right now.
>> correct!
A third book will be published during the first half of this year.
>> The third book will be published during the first half of this year.
I still want to write a book in my future to use my practice and knowledge.
>> Is till want to write books in the future to use/share my experience and knowledge.
Even if people get older and older, it is important to do work, I think.
>> correct!
What do you think about that?
>> correct!
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