My biggest concern about the futres

2017-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I have been a journalist life for thirty years since 1988. I have met lots of people, had been lots of experiences, and had visited lots of places. It has become my various property and value. Now, I will not be long to have my job. It maybe will last only 5 or 6 years. Maybe I can keep it for about ten years. Anyway I need to prepare for my future now. I must begin my secondly life in safety after retired. I have written two books until now. The title of the first book is 'the temptation of the old road, Be desirous of history'. The title of the second book is 'the reason why I walk'. I am ready for the third book. I'm choosing a publishing company right now. A third book will be published during the first half of this year. I still want to write a book in my future to use my practice and knowledge. Even if people get older and older, it is important to do a work, I think. What do you think about that?

강사 첨삭


Hi there [이름]!

You are right, as long as we are alive there\'s hope and we should do whatever we\'d like to do. Good luck with your new book! i hope I could read it someday in English.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I have been a journalist life for thirty years since 1988.

>> I have been a journalist for thirty years.

OR>> I have been a journalist since 1988.

I have met lots of people, had been lots of experiences, and had visited lots of places.

>> correct!

It has become my various property and value.

>> It has become my property and wealth.

Now, I will not be long to have my job.

>> Now, it won\'t be long until I say goodbye to this job.

OR>> After a few years, I\'ll retire from this job.

It maybe will last only 5 or 6 years.

>> It may last only for 5 or 6 years.

Maybe I can keep it for about ten years.

>> correct!

Anyway, I need to prepare for my future now.

>> correct!

I must begin my secondly life in safety after retired.

>> I must begin my second life in safety after retirement/retiring.

I have written two books until now.

>> I have written two books now.

The title of the first book is \'The temptation of the old road, Be desirous of history\'.

>> correct!

The title of the second book is \'The reason why I walk\'.

>> correct!

I am ready for the third book.

>> correct!

I\'m choosing a publishing company right now.

>> correct!

A third book will be published during the first half of this year.

>> The third book will be published during the first half of this year.

I still want to write a book in my future to use my practice and knowledge.

>> Is till want to write books in the future to use/share my experience and knowledge.

Even if people get older and older, it is important to do  work, I think.

>> correct!

What do you think about that?

>> correct!

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