My biggest dream.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Gabby.
Did you have a good day?
My biggest dream is healthy all my family because I\'m my family supervisor.
I always say that no matter what, health is the most important thing.
We know that if you lose your health, it\'s like losing everything.
But we\'re not thinking and then we follow the greed of the world.
We\'re made following it by the media.
It\'s hard to protect of my principle in the world.
Anyway we should have to do exercise like habits.
Not to live long but to live healthy.
And I hope that we live enjoying of the life.
I didn\'t live like that so I regret it. But I live that now as well. hohoho~
Good night, Gabby. Take care.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
Hello, Gabby.
>> Correct.
Did you have a good day?
Did you have a good day?
>> Correct.
My biggest dream is healthy all my family because I\'m my family supervisor.
My biggest dream is healthy all my family because I\'m my family supervisor.
>> My biggest dream is for my family to be healthy because I\'m the family supervisor.
I always say that no matter what, health is the most important thing.
I always say that no matter what, health is the most important thing.
>> Correct.
We know that if you lose your health, it\'s like losing everything.
We know that if you lose your health, it\'s like losing everything.
>> We know that if you lose your health, you\'ll lose everything.
But we\'re not thinking and then we follow the greed of the world.
But we\'re not thinking and then we follow the greed of the world.
>> Correct.
We\'re made following it by the media.
We\'re made following it by the media.
>> Correct.
It\'s hard to protect of my principle in the world.
It\'s hard to protect of my principle in the world.
>> It\'s hard to protect my principles in the world.
Anyway we should have to do exercise like habits.
Anyway we should have to do exercise like habits.
>> Anyway we should exercise every day.
Not to live long but to live healthy.
Not to live long but to live healthy.
>> Correct.
And I hope that we live enjoying of the life.
And I hope that we live enjoying of the life.
>> And I hope that we live enjoying life.
I didn\'t live like that so I regret it. But I live that now as well. hohoho~
I didn\'t live like that so I regret it. But I live that now as well. hohoho~
>> Correct.
Good night, Gabby. Take care.
Good night, Gabby. Take care.
>> Correct.
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