My biggest fear
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My most biggest fear is a little bit of stage fright.
I have a lot of performance this season.
When I was very young like 14, I didn\'t know about scary of stage.
But I become get a older age, I understand about scare of audience and mistake.
So I made a some habit.
Make my self repeate \"you can do it, you can do it.\"
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Fear and anxiety can last for a short time and then pass, but they can also last much longer and you can get stuck with them. In some cases they can take over your life, affecting your ability to eat, sleep, concentrate, travel, enjoy life, or even leave the house or go to work or school. This can hold you back from doing things you want or need to do, and it also affects your health.
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My most biggest fear is a little bit of stage fright.
>> My biggest fear is getting stage fright.
I have a lot of performance this season.
>>I have a lot of performances this season.
When I was very young like 14, I didn\'t know about scary of stage.
>> When I was very young, I was like 14 years old, I didn\'t know about stage frights.
But I become get a older age, I understand about scare of audience and mistake.
>> But when I became older, I understand stage frights more and making mistakes in front of the audiences.
So I made a some habit.
>> With this, I made a habit.
Make my self repeate \"you can do it, you can do it.\"
>> I repeat to myself, \"You can do it! You can do it!\"
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