my biggest goal.
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My biggest goal in my life is to live a better today t[이름] yerterday. I don\'t have very big goal now like to be a my dream job. i\'m confusing. but the fact is if l live a better today t[이름] yesterday, i can improve and i can come true my dreams when my hoping dreams come. So everyday l think and think that i have to learn from yesterday. and prepare for today.
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Hi there, Stella ^^
T[이름]k you for writing your homework! I agree with you, living a better life today will result a better future. So don\'t worry if you still don\'t know what you want to do in life as of now. :)
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
My biggest goal in my life is to live a better today t[이름] yerterday.
>> My biggest goal in life is to live a better life today t[이름] yesterday.
I don\'t have very big goal now like to be a my dream job.
>> I don\'t currently have any very big goals, such as my dream job.
i\'m confusing.
>> I\'m confused.
but the fact is if l live a better today t[이름] yesterday, i can improve and i can come true my dreams when my hoping dreams come.
>>But the truth is that if I live better today t[이름] I did yesterday, I can improve and realize my dreams when they come true.
So everyday l think and think that i have to learn from yesterday. and prepare for today
>> So I think I need to learn every day from yesterday and prepare for today.
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