My biggest goal in my life is living happily with family.
학생이 쓴 원문
My biggest goal in my life is not unusual and so much big. I want to live just happily with family and wished to have my own job. When I think of my past life, I lived ordinary life and accomplished getting my own job formore than 20 years. I satisfied with my life and my career enough. It is good for my health to think positively. ^^ If there is another goal in my life, I want to live in attached house inclding backyard which dogs can run and play at. I wish that the goal will be able to be achieved.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju [이름]. I wish you all the best on your next goal. I hope you\'ll be able to achieve it. Thank you for sharing your goals and your own thoughts on the topic. I look forward to talking to you tomorrow for our class. Have a good one! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
My biggest goal in my life is not unusual and so much big.
>> CORRECT =)
I want to live just happily with family and wished to have my own job.
>> CORRECT =)
When I think of my past life, I lived ordinary life and accomplished getting my own job formore than 20 years.
>> When I think of my past life, I lived an ordinary life and accomplished getting my own job for more than 20 years.
I satisfied with my life and my career enough.
>> I am satisfied enough with my life and my career.
It is good for my health to think positively. ^^
>> CORRECT =)
If there is another goal in my life, I want to live in attached house inclding backyard which dogs can run and play at.
>> If there is another goal in my life, I want to live in an attached house including a backyard where dogs can run and play.
I wish that the goal will be able to be achieved.
>> CORRECT =)
My biggest goal in my life is not unusual and so much big.
>> CORRECT =)
I want to live just happily with family and wished to have my own job.
>> CORRECT =)
When I think of my past life, I lived ordinary life and accomplished getting my own job formore than 20 years.
>> When I think of my past life, I lived an ordinary life and accomplished getting my own job for more than 20 years.
I satisfied with my life and my career enough.
>> I am satisfied enough with my life and my career.
It is good for my health to think positively. ^^
>> CORRECT =)
If there is another goal in my life, I want to live in attached house inclding backyard which dogs can run and play at.
>> If there is another goal in my life, I want to live in an attached house including a backyard where dogs can run and play.
I wish that the goal will be able to be achieved.
>> CORRECT =)
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