My birthday
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is my hbirthday.My mom gave me a smartphone for presnt.
My dad will give me a cake.And my English teacher give me a notebook.I will eat meat with my family.It will be a nice day.I like ice cream cake.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Happy Birthday again!
I hope that your wishes will come true.
Enjoy the night with your family. ^^
See you on Tuesday!
_Teacher Dianne
Today is my hbirthday.
>> Today is my birthday.
My mom gave me a smartphone for presnt.>> My mom gave me a smartphone as my present.
My dad will give me a cake.
>> Correct
And my English teacher give me a notebook.
>> And my English teacher gave me a notebook.
I will eat meat with my family.
>> Correct
It will be a nice day.
>> Correct
I like ice cream cake.
>> Correct
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