my birthday.

2010-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

^ ^. Lei. i wrote about fool's day. yesterday was fool's day and also my birthday. that was my first birthday at this company. because of yesterday was fool's day. many people didn't believe my birthday. some people thougt i did mischief. i worried about it. but in a way i enjoyed it. i didn't want to my coworkers have any burden for my birthday gift. due to yesterday was fool's day, i could anounce my birthday without burden. my coworker celebrated my birthday. i was very happy.

강사 첨삭

HI [이름]! Happy happy birthday, and happy fool’s day indeed! I hope you are happy and I wish you more good things throughout the year. I wish you good health and good relationships with your family and friends as well! Take care! =)  Lei. i wrote about fool's day. yesterday was fool's day and also my birthday. >>> Lei, I wrote about Fool’s day. Yesterday was fool's day and also my birthday. that was my first birthday at this company. >>>That was my first birthday in this company. because of yesterday was fool's day. many people didn't believe my birthday. some people thougt i did mischief. >>>Because yesterday was fool's day, many people didn't believe it was my birthday. Some people thought I was only fooling them. i worried about it. but in a way i enjoyed it. i didn't want to my coworkers have any burden for my birthday gift. >>>I was worried about it, but anyway I enjoyed it. I didn’t want my co- workers to have any burden for my birthday gift. due to yesterday was fool's day, i could anounce my birthday without burden. >>>Because yesterday was fool’s day, I could announce my birthday without burden. my coworker celebrated my birthday. i was very happy. >>>My co- worker and I celebrated my birthday. I was very happy.

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