My birthday party!!
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강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks a lot for sending this in.^^
I truly love checking your works.
Keep on writing, okay?
Well, here is a proverb that you may think about:
\"Absence makes the heart grow fonder.\"
Belated happy birthday!
I am so glad that you had a great time with your family.^^
You ate a lot!^^
Maybe we can still talk about these ones in class, if you don\'t mind.
Have a good day!
My birthday is Aril 27th!
>>My birthday is on the 27th of April.
But I couldn\'t open the party because of exam!
>> But I couldn\'t hold a party because of our exam!
So today, I have a party!!
>> Correct
OR >> So today, I will hold a party!^^
I go to the buffet with my family.
>>I will go to a buffet restaurant with my family.
>> I went to a buffet restaurant with my family.^^
I eat steak, pork, sosauge, ice cream, sushi, noodle, pasta, etc~!!
>>I will eat steaks, pork, sausage, ice cream, sushi, noodles, pasta, etc.!
>>I ate steaks, pork, sausages, ice cream, sushi, noodles, pasta, etc.!^^
Oh, I\'m so full~^^
>> Correct!
Also, I\'m happy^^
>> Correct!
I spend enjoy day with party~
>> I enjoyed my party.
>>I had a good time.^^
>>I had fun at the party.^^
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