My boss

2010-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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I have a immediate boss in the company. He is in his late 30's and still single. Since he has a great personality , I can't understand why he still doesn't get married. His first impression was not that good because I thought that he would scold me strictly when I made a mistake. But I was wrong. He is very considerate person as if he were my big brother. He has a bald hair. but he is handsome. He looks like a movie star "Bruce Willis" I like him

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Hi [이름].I guess you have a good boss.Bosses were usually looks very strict,weird and kinda annoying kkk..I'm glad that you found a great superior.I hope someday you will attain his position too.Boss [이름] isn't amazing?Very good composition just be mindful in using article/the/an/a.   LINA   I have a immediate boss in the company.>>” an” He is in his late 30's and still single. >>Correct Since he has a great personality ,>>Correct I can't understand why he still doesn't get married.>>Correct because I thought that he would scold me strictly>>Correct when I made a mistake.>>Correct But I was wrong.>>Correct He is very considerate person as if he were my big brother.>>”was” He has a bald hair. but he is handsome.>>He is bald. but he is handsome He looks like a movie star "Bruce Willis">>CorrectI like him >>Correct  

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