My boss
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I have a immediate boss in the company.
He is in his late 30's and still single.
Since he has a great personality ,
I can't understand why he still doesn't get married.
His first impression was not that good
because I thought that he would scold me strictly
when I made a mistake.
But I was wrong.
He is very considerate person as if he were my big brother.
He has a bald hair. but he is handsome.
He looks like a movie star "Bruce Willis"
I like him
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Hi [이름].I guess you have a good boss.Bosses were usually looks very strict,weird and kinda annoying kkk..I'm glad that you found a great superior.I hope someday you will attain his position too.Boss [이름] isn't amazing?Very good composition just be mindful in using article/the/an/a.
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I have a immediate boss in the company.>>” an”
He is in his late 30's and still single.
>>Correct
Since he has a great personality ,>>Correct
I can't understand why he still doesn't get married.>>Correct
because I thought that he would scold me strictly>>Correct
when I made a mistake.>>Correct
But I was wrong.>>Correct
He is very considerate person as if he were my big brother.>>”was”
He has a bald hair. but he is handsome.>>He is bald. but he is handsome
He looks like a movie star "Bruce Willis">>CorrectI like him
>>Correct
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