my boss counseled me to buy a audio book.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have time to study English during a work.One day my boss saw that I studied english during a work. I worried about he would be angry about my study. fortunately my boss prefer to study than spend times doing nothing. Actually I have many times because almost of my tasks are waiting his order. so I studied during the time. He knew well about that. he couseled me to buy a audio book which is English novel. and listen the audio book without book for one or two months. after, try to listen and write the text. he said to me It's a good way to promote my eglish.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I agree with your boss. It really is a good way to improve most specifically your listening skills. Good luck! ;)
Jenny
Here are the corrections:
I have time to study English during a work.
>> I usually study English during work.
One day my boss saw that I studied english during a work.
>> One day, my boss saw me studying English during work.
I worried about he would be angry about my study.
>> I worried that he might get angry about me studying during working hours.
fortunately my boss prefer to study than spend times doing nothing.
>> Fortunately, my boss prefers me studying than spending my time doing nothing.
Actually I have many times because almost of my tasks are waiting his order.
>> Actually, I have lots of free time because almost all of my tasks are based on the orders he makes.
so I studied during the time. He knew well about that.
>> He knew well about that time I studied during work.
he couseled me to buy a audio book which is English novel.
>> He recommended me to buy an audio book of an English novel.
and listen the audio book without book for one or two months.
>> He said I should just listen to it in a month or two.
after, try to listen and write the text.
>> After that, I will try to listen and write the text down.
he said to me It's a good way to promote my eglish.
>> He said that it’s a good way for me to improve my English skills.
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