my boss is waiting for his promotion confirmation.

Last friday, I put off our class. because, I had to attend the party, which celebrate my boss' promotion. ... and I have to get out here and I will continue next time~ --- I came into my room. I continue to tell the story. I got a call from my senior officer. He asked me if I can join the party. So, there were six men who could join the party including my boss. We discussed the menu for main dish of party and we concluded grilled fich could be fine. I was driver. and other senior men's job is booking the table. we ate grilled fish with happy mood. Actually, my boss' promotion is not confirmed, so We yelled "For the promotion!!" every time we drunk our beer and soju. 3 hours later, We were drunken except me(because I was driver.) and we paid the bill. it was amazing. the bill was great amount. I regret joining the party. and we went to screen golf room. I don't know how to play golf, but my senior officers are played screen golf. I felt sad. anyway, I hope that my boss going to be promoted.

Hello and a happy Monday to you!

Now I understand why you had put off our class.

Even though you regret what you did later that night, I wish you still had a great time.^^

I think you have a good relationship with your boss.

Anyhow, review the grammatical errors that I had noted.

If you have questions, feel free to ask them during our class.

Take care!^^

~~T. Nina~~

Last friday, I put off our class.
because, I had to attend the party, which celebrate my boss\' promotion.

>>Last Friday, I put off our class because I had to attend a party to celebrate my boss\'s promotion.
... and I have to get out here and I will continue next time~
>>I have to get out from here to tell you and I will continue this later.
I came into my room.

>>Correct.

or>>I am now in my room.

I continue to tell the story.
>>I will continue with the story.

I got a call from my senior officer. He asked me if I can join the party.
>>Correct.

or>>I got a call from my senior officer asking me if I can join the party.

So, there were six men who could join the party including my boss.
>>So, there were six men who joined the party including my boss.

We discussed the menu for main dish of party and we concluded grilled fich could be fine.
>>We discussed the menu for the main dish of the party and we concluded that grilled fish would be fine.

I was driver. and other senior men\'s job is booking the table.
>>I was the driver and other senior men\'s job is booking a table.

we ate grilled fish with happy mood.

>>We ate grilled fish with a happy mood.
Actually, my boss\' promotion is not confirmed, so We yelled \"For the promotion!!\" every time we drunk our beer and soju.
>>Actually, my boss\' promotion is not yet confirmed, so we yelled \"For the promotion!!\" every time we drunk our beer and soju.
3 hours later, We were drunken except me(because I was driver.)
and we paid the bill.
>>3 hours later, everybody were/got drunk except me(because I was the driver) then we paid the bill.
it was amazing.

>>It was amazing.

the bill was great amount.

>>The bill was in great amount.

or>>The bill was expensive.

I regret joining the party.
>> Correct.

and we went to screen golf room.

>>After that, we went to a screened golf room.

I don\'t know how to play golf, but
my senior officers are played screen golf.

>>I don\'t know how to play golf, but my seniors play screened golf.

or>>I don\'t know how to play golf, but my seniors do.

I felt sad.

>>Correct.
anyway, I hope that my boss going to be promoted.

 >>Anyway, I hope that my boss gets the promotion.

or>>Anyway, I hope that my boss will be promoted.^^