My brother gets his job

2010-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. I'm yongsu in korea. Thanks for reading my letter. I'm very happy now as my brother gets his job. he did job interview last week. and I heard he passed the interview. his company is insuarance company. he studies everyday now. so we can't meet together. I'm look forward to his payday. haha.. then, wee you later. byebye~ Best regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello.I'm yongsu in korea. >>I’m Yongsu from Korea. Thanks for reading my letter.>>Correct. I'm very happy now as my brother gets his job. >> I’m very happy now as my brother was able to get a job.he did job interview last week. and I heard he passed the interview. >> He had a job interview last week and I heard he passed the interview.his company is insuarance company. he studies everyday now. >> He is going to work for an insurance company and he is studying everyday now. so we can't meet together. >> Correct.I'm look forward to his payday. haha.. >> I’m looking forward for his payday. Ha! Ha! then, wee you later. >> We will see you later.byebye~ >Bye. Best regards,Yong Su.

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