My brother is nignog!
학생이 쓴 원문
My brother is nignog!
He always tease me!!!!
When I went to home and I saw my brother at door, My brother peeved me!!!!!!!
But I was very tired because of academy and study!!!
He tease me quitely and like a troll!
So I always shout him, and I get a scolding from my mother!!
I say "He is always first! I don't have any fault! Only I'm angry and shout!"
But My mom always doesn't here that, and She thinks it's excuse!
I am very stuffy,,, What should I do?
When He teased me again, I teased him quitely,too!
But I always loose,,, He is real troll! How bad he is!!!!
Oh my god,,,, Help me!!!! What should I do~~~~~~!!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sarah dear!
Oh~ I understand how you feel. I hope that your mother will listen to your thoughts and that she will try to talk to your brother about his actions.
Be more patient and try to ignore what your brother is doing to you. ^^
That\'s a natural action of a brother.
Believe me, I have a brother too and he\'s acting that way ever since we were kids.
He\'s still like that up until now! :p
Anyway, I enjoy our bickering and our arguments.
It keeps on my toes.
Sarah, please review the corrections I\'ve made for your composition.
-- Teacher Heidi ^^ ----
My brother is nignog!
>>My brother is a nignog!He always tease me!!!!
>>He always teases me!!!!When I went to home and I saw my brother at door, My brother peeved me!!!!!!!
>>When I go home and I see my brother, my brother peeves at me.But I was very tired because of academy and study!!!
>> But I was very tired because I come from the academy and I have been studying.He tease me quitely and like a troll!
>>He teases me a lot just like a troll!So I always shout him, and I get a scolding from my mother!!
>>So I always shout at him and I get scolded by my mother!I say \"He is always first! I don\'t have any fault! Only I\'m angry and shout!\"
>>I tell my mother, \"He started it first! It\'s not my fault! I only shout because I\'m angry!\"But My mom always doesn\'t here that, and She thinks it\'s excuse!
>> But my mom doesn\'t listen and she thinks that I\'m only making excuses.I am very stuffy,,, What should I do?
>> I feel stuffed. What should I do?When He teased me again, I teased him quitely,too!
>>When he teases me, I tease him a lot too!But I always loose,,,
>>But I always lose...
He is real troll!
>>He is really like a troll!!
How bad he is!!!!
>>That\'s how bad he is!!!
Oh my god,,,, Help me!!!! What should I do~~~~~~!!!!
>>Correct.
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