My brother\'s advantage
학생이 쓴 원문
Before I say the best advantage about my brother you should know 4 things about personality. First is being polite, second is being gentle. Third is being fair, and being wise. These are 4 things that good people have. My brother has these 4 things. It is the best advantage that my brother has. If people have it, the people can keep friend relationship for a long time. Usually, ENTP doesn\'t have them. That\'s why my mother always say, \'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother, hey Dave(my brother), discipline your brother!\'. In conclusion, I have to respect my brother\'s advantage and try to have that \'4 things\'.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daniel! Merry Christmas! Thank you for sharing about your brother\'s personality. It\'s okay not to have what your brother has. It\'s okay to be unique.
- Teacher Debbie
>> Before I write about the best thing about my brother, you should know four kinds of personality: polite, gentle, fair and wise.
These are 4 things that good people have.
>> These are the four things that good people have.
My brother has these 4 things.
>> My brother has these four things.
It is the best advantage that my brother has.
>> These are the best things that my brother has.
If people have it, the people can keep friend relationship for a long time.
>> If people have these, they can keep relationships for a long time.
Usually, ENTP doesn\'t have them.
>> Usually, people with the ENTP personality don\'t have them.
That\'s why my mother always say, \'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother, hey Dave(my brother), discipline your brother!\'.
>> That\'s why my mother always says, \'Daniel, you have to learn these from your brother. Hey, Dave! Teach your brother!\"
In conclusion, I have to respect my brother\'s advantage and try to have that \'4 things\'.
>> In conclusion, I have to respect my brother\'s strengths and try to have these four things.
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