my busiest day of the week
학생이 쓴 원문
Students like me, have to go to the academy and we should go to the s[이름]ol. I think busiest day is Monday and Friday. At Monday and Friday, there are not much of academy, but the academy I am going at Monday and Friday takes a lot of time.
At Monday, I wake up at 8:00 and I arrive at my classroom at nine o clock. At 3:00, the class is over and I come back to my home. Then, I have to do my homework for my English academy. Then, I review the vocabulary word from last lesson.
When I finish my homework and review all of my vocab word, it\'s 4 pm. Then, I relax and have some free time until 5:00. At five o clock, I have to eat dinner so I can go to the academy. At five thirty, I have to change my clothes and brush my hair.
At 6:24, I ride a bus (s[이름]ol bus maybe) and arrive my academy at 7 pm. Finally we start our class at 7pm and finish at 10 pm. Then, I ride the bus again and come back home at 10:25 and I eat some snack and pack my backpack for s[이름]ol tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
You really have a very busy day~
You really have a very busy day~
Students in Korea are amazing because you really study hard, both in s[이름]ol and academy.
You can do it!~
- T. Rina
1. Students like me, have to go to the academy and we should go to the s[이름]ol.
>> CORRECT!
2. I think busiest day is Monday and Friday.
>> I think the busiest days are Mondays and Fridays.
3. At Monday and Friday, there are not much of academy, but the academy I am going at Monday and Friday takes a lot of time.
>> On Mondays and Fridays, there are not much of academy, but the academies I go to on those days take a lot of time.
4. At Monday, I wake up at 8:00 and I arrive at my classroom at nine o clock.
>> On Mondays, I wake up at 8:00 and I arrive at my class room at 9:00.
5. At 3:00, the class is over and I come back to my home.
>> CORRECT!
6. Then, I have to do my homework for my English academy.
>> CORRECT!
7. Then, I review the vocabulary word from last lesson.
>> Then, I review the vocabulary words from the last lesson.
8. When I finish my homework and review all of my vocab word, it\'s 4 pm.
>> When I finish my homework and review all of the vocabulary words, it\'s already 4:00 p.m.
9. Then, I relax and have some free time until 5:00.
>> CORRECT!
10. At five o clock, I have to eat dinner so I can go to the academy.
>> CORRECT!
11. At five thirty, I have to change my clothes and brush my hair.
>> CORRECT!
12. At 6:24, I ride a bus (s[이름]ol bus maybe) and arrive my academy at 7 pm.
>> At 6:24, I ride a bus-- a s[이름]ol bus, and arrive at the academy at 7:00 p.m.
13. Finally we start our class at 7pm and finish at 10 pm.
>> CORRECT!
14. Then, I ride the bus again and come back home at 10:25 and I eat some snack and pack my backpack for s[이름]ol tomorrow.
>> Then, I ride the bus again and come back home at 10:25 and I eat some snacks and pack my backpack for s[이름]ol tomorrow.
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