my busiest day of week
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My busiest day of the week is Tuesday.
That is because when the week is Tuesday, I need to go to a lot of academies.
My second reason is there is no subject I like at school on Tuesday. But, there are a lot of studying subjects on Tuesday.
My third reason is when the week is Tuesday, it has a lot of exercise academies on Tuesday.
Finally, I hate Tuesday.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for explaining your answer well.
Keep it up! ^^
- T. Rina
1. My busiest day of the week is Tuesday.
>> CORRECT!
2. That is because when the week is Tuesday, I need to go to a lot of academies.
>> CORRECT!
3. My second reason is there is no subject I like at school on Tuesday.
>> CORRECT!
4. But, there are a lot of studying subjects on Tuesday.
>> But, there are a lot of subjects that I need to study on Tuesday.
5. My third reason is when the week is Tuesday, it has a lot of exercise academies on Tuesday.
>> My third reason is when it is Tuesday, there are a lot of exercises we do in academies.
6. Finally, I hate Tuesday.
>> CORRECT!
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