My cable phone was broken
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My cable phone was broken, so I want to suggest calling to my cellular phone([휴대전화]) or treating no class.
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Hi there Sir [이름]^^
I\'m sorry to hear, that you cable phone was broken but in that case, you have to call our manager to discuss this matter^^
Have a great day and take care^^
See you in class^^
~T.Chelsea
My cable phone was broken, so I want to suggest calling to my cellular phone([휴대전화]) or treating no class.
>>My cable phone was broken, so I suggest you to call my cellular phone ([휴대전화]) or we\'re not going to have a class.
I\'m sorry to hear, that you cable phone was broken but in that case, you have to call our manager to discuss this matter^^
Have a great day and take care^^
See you in class^^
~T.Chelsea
My cable phone was broken, so I want to suggest calling to my cellular phone([휴대전화]) or treating no class.
>>My cable phone was broken, so I suggest you to call my cellular phone ([휴대전화]) or we\'re not going to have a class.
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