My career plan

2022-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Hi, Faith! My career plan is to study in graduate school and work in the laboratory after graduation. I think I\'m following the plan. But I\'m not sure how fast I can get the Ph.D. I want to graduate as fast as possible. And I\'ll work in a laboratory abroad because I want to have experience living abroad. Thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate you.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] [이름]! I truly agree with Napoleon Hill that you achieve what you conceive and believe. Go for it!
-Faith-
Hi, Faith!
>> CORRECT
My career plan is to study in graduate school and work in the laboratory after graduation.
>> CORRECT
I think I\'m following the plan. 
>> I think things go as planned, so far.
But I\'m not sure how fast I can get the Ph.D.
>> But, I\'m not sure how fast I can get the Ph.D.
I want to graduate as fast as possible.
>> CORRECT
And I\'ll work in a laboratory abroad because I want to have experience living abroad.
>> And then, I\'ll work in a laboratory abroad because I want to have an experience living abroad.
Thank you for the feedback.
>> CORRECT
I really appreciate you.
>> CORRECT

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