My cel-phone is out of order.!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
My cel-phone is out of order.!!!
I'm sorry. I already order my new cel-phone but unfortunately
it will be delivered tomorrow. So, I can't attend class this afternoon. Sorry. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow afternoon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
I am sorry to hear about your mobile phone. Just be careful next time not to break your cellphone ^;^. See you tomorrow. Take care!!!
Lei :-)
My cel-phone is out of order.!!!
>>My cell phone is out of order.
>>My cell phone was broken.
>>My mobile phone is not working.I'm sorry.
>>correct
I already order my new cel-phone but unfortunately it will be delivered tomorrow.
>>I already ordered for a new cell phone but unfortunately, it will still be delivered tomorrow.
So, I can't attend class this afternoon. Sorry.
>>correct
Have a nice day. See you tomorrow afternoon.
>>correct
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