my chicken layed an egg

2010-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Today, I saw an egg in the cage with chickens. Mom got it in her hend when I came out. And then I saw it falling and cracked. There were just one girl chicken in the cage and it looked very helthy. last time a girl chicken died because other chickens had picking at her. I hope that I would se a chick from the cage befor cristmas.

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Hi [이름]! Oh, poor egg...  Your mother wasn’t careful enough. That chick would’ve been cute and precious. Just wait, you’ll never know when the chicken will lay another one right? my chicken layed an egg  >> My chicken laid an egg. Today, I saw an egg in the cage with chickens. >> correct >>> Today, I saw an egg in the cage with the chickens. -- better Mom got it in her hend when I came out. >> Mom had it in her hand when I came out. And then I saw it falling and cracked. >> Then I saw it fall down and it cracked. There were just one girl chicken in the cage and it looked very helthy. >> There was just one hen in the cage and it looked healthy. **We call the girl chicken a HEN. ^^ last time a girl chicken died because other chickens had picking at her. >> Last time, the hen died because the other chickens were picking on it. I hope that I would se a chick from the cage befor cristmas.  >> I hope to see a chick on their cage before Christmas. **Be careful with your spelling.

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