My childhood.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It seems you had a great childhood [이름].
Those memories should be really treasured.
I also experienced those things with my sisters, well except for the boating thing. Haha!
Anyway, perhaps you are already on your way to the airport.
See you on Friday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Looking back on my life, I think the happiest moment in my life seems to be when I was a kid.
>>> Looking back, I think the happiest moment in my life seems to be when I was a kid.
I lived with my parents and elder sisters and there wasn\'t anything to worry about.
>>> Correct!
Although my parents were busy running their own furniture factory, my sisters took good care of me.
>>> Correct!
In my parents\' factory, there were many animals such as dogs, cats, chickens, ducks and a turkey.
>>> Correct!
Also, the mountain surrounded the factory so I could run around in nature all the time.
>>> Also, the factory was surrounded by mountains so I could run around the nature all the time.
There was no time to get board.
>>> There was no time to get bored.
I was a bright, cheerful, bold littly lady.
>>> I was a bright, cheerful and bold little lady.
The only thing that I had to think about was what I should do for fun with my sisters next.
>>> Correct!
My sisters and I climbed up the mountain with dogs, rode a boat at the river whatever we want and at night, had a bonfire sitting around and eating baked sweet potato.
>>>My sisters and I climbed up the mountain with our dogs, rode a boat at the river whenever we wanted, sat around a bonfire while eating sweet potatoes.
We all married now so we couldn\'t live together anymore like before.
>>> We are all married now so we can\'t live together like before anymore.
That is why I miss those days of my childhood the most.
>>> Correct!
The memories of the time will remain in my heart like precious treasures until I die.
>>> Correct!
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