My childhood memories.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!
I born to a mountain district. There weren\\\\\\\'t top water and electricity.
That just was beautiful a night sky and the shade of trees and a lot of star and the moon only.
I wad coward when I am childhood.
But when my friend called me, I just went out at night. Maybe my childhood was activity.
Every night my childhood friends enjoyed at the wall of project moonlight seeing our shadow.
I captred sparrow with brothers at dark night.
When they were sleep, I captured they by my hand.
Now I am thinking, I was bad.
By the way, It\\\\\\\'s very hot today.
My 10,000 steps walking was difficult under sunlight.
But I walked around the apartment at from 3.30p.m. to 5.p.m..
I am walking exercise 10 thousand steps everyday.
You try it for your healthy. You don\\\\\\\'t know important of exercise because you are young, pretty and healthy yet.
Good night Gabby.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Thanks for sharing your sweet childhood memories.
- T. Gabby :)
Hi!
>> Correct.
I born to a mountain district. There weren\\\\\\\'t top water and electricity.
>> I was born in the mountain district where there were no water or electricity.
That just was beautiful a night sky and the shade of trees and a lot of star and the moon only.
>> We can see the beautiful night sky, the stars, the moond and the shade of trees around our place.
I wad coward when I am childhood.
>> I was a coward during my childhood days.
But when my friend called me, I just went out at night. Maybe my childhood was activity.
>> My childhood activity was playing with my friend who\'s calling me and we usually go out at night.
Every night my childhood friends enjoyed at the wall of project moonlight seeing our shadow.
>> My childhood friends and I enjoyed the wall of project moonlight seeing our shadow.
I captred sparrow with brothers at dark night.
>> I captured sparrow with my brothers at night time.
When they were sleep, I captured they by my hand.
>> When they were asleep, I captured it by my hand.
Now I am thinking, I was bad.
>> Now I think that I was bad.
By the way, It\\\\\\\'s very hot today.
>> By the way, it\'s very hot today.
My 10,000 steps walking was difficult under sunlight.
>> My 10,000 steps were more difficult to complete under the sunlight.
But I walked around the apartment at from 3.30p.m. to 5.p.m..
>> So I walked around the apartment fro 3:30pm-5pm.
I am walking exercise 10 thousand steps everyday.
>> I do my 10,000 steps exercise everyday.
You try it for your healthy.
>> You try it for your health.
You don\\\\\\\'t know important of exercise because you are young, pretty and healthy yet.
>> You don\'t know how important exercise yet because you are young, pretty and still healthy.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.
- T. Gabby :)
Hi!
>> Correct.
I born to a mountain district. There weren\\\\\\\'t top water and electricity.
>> I was born in the mountain district where there were no water or electricity.
That just was beautiful a night sky and the shade of trees and a lot of star and the moon only.
>> We can see the beautiful night sky, the stars, the moond and the shade of trees around our place.
I wad coward when I am childhood.
>> I was a coward during my childhood days.
But when my friend called me, I just went out at night. Maybe my childhood was activity.
>> My childhood activity was playing with my friend who\'s calling me and we usually go out at night.
Every night my childhood friends enjoyed at the wall of project moonlight seeing our shadow.
>> My childhood friends and I enjoyed the wall of project moonlight seeing our shadow.
I captred sparrow with brothers at dark night.
>> I captured sparrow with my brothers at night time.
When they were sleep, I captured they by my hand.
>> When they were asleep, I captured it by my hand.
Now I am thinking, I was bad.
>> Now I think that I was bad.
By the way, It\\\\\\\'s very hot today.
>> By the way, it\'s very hot today.
My 10,000 steps walking was difficult under sunlight.
>> My 10,000 steps were more difficult to complete under the sunlight.
But I walked around the apartment at from 3.30p.m. to 5.p.m..
>> So I walked around the apartment fro 3:30pm-5pm.
I am walking exercise 10 thousand steps everyday.
>> I do my 10,000 steps exercise everyday.
You try it for your healthy.
>> You try it for your health.
You don\\\\\\\'t know important of exercise because you are young, pretty and healthy yet.
>> You don\'t know how important exercise yet because you are young, pretty and still healthy.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.
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