My childhood neighborhood.

I used to live in coutryside. It was a typical rural village. So All I could see was the nature. My house was big because we used it as a supermaket too. It had a beautiful garden. One day, my father made a swimming pool which looked like a shape of korea in the garden. It was beautiful. and I also loved my neighborhood There was a big mountain behind of my house , a stream in front of my house , and a big tree in the middle of town. My favorite place was around the tree. I used to spend a great portion of my time to play with my friends by the tree. I think that place was good to have a family. Sometimes I really miss it.

Hi [이름]. I guess that you have a great environment.As I am reading your composition I am also imagining how your place look like.Good thing that you include your good memories in this place.Keep practicing [이름].You're great!   I used to live in coutryside.>>Countryside.Correct spellingIt was a typical rural village.>>CorrectSo All I could see was the nature.>>Correct My house was big because we used it as a supermaket too.>>Supermarket.Correct sentence. >> My house was big because it used to be a supermaket too.It had a beautiful garden.>>CorrectOne day, my father made a swimming pool which looked like a shape of korea in the garden.>>Correct >>Before,my father made a swimming pool which shaped like Korea in the garden.BetterIt was beautiful. >>Correct and I also loved my neighborhood >>Correct There was a big mountain behind of my house , >>There was a big mountain behind my house.  a stream in front of my house , and a big tree in the middle of town.>>CorrectMy favorite place was around the tree.>>CorrectI used to spend a great portion of my time to play with my friends by the tree.>>big portion.BetterI think that place was good to have a family.>>Correct Sometimes I really miss it. >>Correct