My children.

2020-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi Gabby! I am sorry. I talk to you about my son. He is my first child. I think he is smart,good and handsome. He grow up a stubbon young man. He nust study to over 3years. Sometimes I think difficult of him. He is like grown-up. Also he cooks well too. Anyway the child is better than me all things. I will write next about my daughter. Bye Gabby.

강사 첨삭

Hello Suzan. Thanks for sharing. Good job!
-T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
I am sorry.
>> Correct.
I talk to you about my son.
>> I\'ll talk to you about my son.
He is my first child.
>> Correct.
I think he is smart,good and handsome.
>> I think that he is smart, good and handsome.
He grow up a stubbon young man.
>> He grew up as a stubborn young man.
He must study to over 3years.
>> He studied for over 3 years.
Sometimes I think difficult of him.
>> Sometimes he\'s difficult to handle.
He is like grown-up. Also he cooks well too.
>> He\'s like an adult. He also cooks well.
Anyway the child is better than me all things.
>> Anyway, that child is better than me in all of the things.
I will write next about my daughter.
>> I will write about my daughter next time.
Bye Gabby.
>> Correct.

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