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I concerned which fast food was better to eat on last weekend,then, I chose spicy fried chicken. I already ate this one before, but I wanted to spicy food, so I chose this food. Of couse it need to cook, but I think it can be a fast food, because it is delivery food which is very easy to get and have a fast speed. Finally I ate spicy chicken,it was so painful, due to a spicy taste. After eating,I thought that my stress went far away. I was so happy and funny.
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Hi [이름],
Wow, I felt so hungry upon reading your articles.
Well, here are the corrections. I뭢 glad you enjoyed.
Take care
Connie
I concerned which fast food was better to eat on last weekend,then, I chose spicy fried chicken.
>> I was concerned on which fast food will be better to eat this weekend, then I finally chose spicy fried chicken.
I already ate this one before, but I wanted to spicy food, so I chose this food.
>> Corect
Of couse it need to cook, but I think it can be a fast food, because it is delivery food which is very easy to get and have a fast speed.
>> Of course it need to be cooked but since it is fast food it뭩 delivery will be faster.
Finally I ate spicy chicken,it was so painful, due to a spicy taste.
>> Finally, I ate spicy chicken I felt pain in my mouth due to the spicy taste.
After eating,I thought that my stress went far away. I was so happy and funny.
>> After eating, I thought that my stress was relieved. I was so happy and I had fun.
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