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I went to a cocert on the last christmas. It was the second time that I went to their concert. Unfortunately, they don't have any more plan that they hold the concert together. So, it lasted for four hours. They seemed very exhusted since it started on 23rd of December. But they looked very passionate. Actually, their voice was not the best condition. They said that they were hesitant to hold it since they figured their vocal status was pretty bad. They asked us to understand and cheer them to make it. The viewrs definately agreed with it and we enjoyed their performance very much. They really tried to make us hilarious. So, they made up their voice.

Hi [이름]! I’m glad you enjoyed your Christmas Day! It was really wise of the band to perform well even if their voices are not in the best condition. I can say that they are really good performers. Anyway, I also hope you will enjoy your New Year’s Day! Take care! ^_^ My christmas >> My Christmas Day I went to a cocert on the last christmas. >> I went to a concert last Christmas. It was the second time that I went to their concert. >> Correct Unfortunately, they don't have any more plan that they hold the concert together. >> Unfortunately, they don’t have any plans of holding a concert in the future. So, it lasted for four hours. >> Correct They seemed very exhusted since it started on 23rd of December. >> They seemed very exhausted since it started on the 23rd of December. But they looked very passionate. >> Correct  Actually, their voice was not the best condition. >>  Actually, they’re voices are not in the best condition.  They said that they were hesitant to hold it since they figured their vocal status was pretty bad. >> They mentioned that they were hesitant to sing since their voices are pretty bad. They asked us to understand and cheer them to make it. >> They asked for us to understand and cheer for them so they can perform well.  The viewrs definately agreed with it and we enjoyed their performance very much. >> The audience definitely agreed with it and we enjoyed their performance very much. They really tried to make us hilarious. >> They tried their best to make us laugh. So, they made up their voice. >> So they made some strategy with their voices.