My class Teacher
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Yesterday, our class's student and 1st class's student had foughted orally not using violence. But, our class friend didn't hit him so that guy had punishment. Our teacher said to the 1st class's guy that if she see him in the hallway in front or near our class, she said she will kill him and also the first thing that my teacher had made him do was to kneel.Even though our teacher do not always say goods words to use, she is in our team.
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Hi Kevin^^
Great evening. Thought you were going to sleep already ^^ good thing you still manage to find time writing this short story as a continuation of what you sent me yesterday. Check out the following corrections.
T'Joan
Yesterday, our class's student and 1st class's student had foughted orally not using violence.
>>Yesterday, our classmate and a 1st grader fought orally without using violence.
But, our class friend didn't hit him so that guy had punishment.
>>But, our class friend didn't hit him so that guy was given a punishment. Our teacher said to the 1st class's guy that if she see him in the hallway in front or near our class, she said she will kill him and also the first thing that my teacher had made him do was to kneel.
>>Our teacher told the 1st grader that if she sees him in the hallway in front or near our class, she said she will kill him and the first thing that my teacher had also made him do was to kneel.
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