My clay production

Today, I made my clay production. In our class the topic our teacher gave us was " Make a clay production which is based on your experience". So I drew a picture when I camped in yong-wall. I made a campfire, 2 people and clouds by using clay. It was harder than I thought. Also, I was more nervous because it was a test. I tried to do well, but I'm not good at making clay. I made with my utmost sincerity so it was not very bad when I saw it. But, my teacher gave me a B. There are four levels ,A B C D and I got B. My teacher is also a teacher of art which teaches talented people who passed 3 tests. So she is more sharp than other teachers. Anyway, I think I'm not very good at clay.

Hi Joey! Wow! Molding clay is fun! Yes, I know it is a real challenge to mold a clay into something. It takes skills and much practice. I bet your clay production looks just fine.     Today, I made my clay production. >>correct In our class the topic our teacher gave us was " Make a clay production which is based on your experience". >>Our teacher wanted the class to make a clay production based on our experience. So I drew a picture when I camped in yong-wall. I made a campfire, 2 people and clouds by using clay. >>So I drew a pictue of me camping at yong-wall. I made a campfire, 2 people and clouds out of clay. It was harder than I thought. Also, I was more nervous because it was a test. >>correct I tried to do well, but I'm not good at making clay. I made with my utmost sincerity so it was not very bad when I saw it. >>I tried to do well, but I'm not good at making clay. I made it with my utmost sincerity so it didn't looked that bad.  But, my teacher gave me a B. There are four levels ,A B C D and I got B. >>correct My teacher is also a teacher of art which teaches talented people who passed 3 tests. >>My teacher is also an art teacher who taught talented people who passed 3 tests. So she is more sharp than other teachers. >>So she is more strict and detailed than other teachers.Anyway, I think I'm not very good at clay. >>correct