My college times.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby.
You are asking about times I don\'t want to remember. But it\'s homework, so I\'ll do it.
I was happiest when I play pingpong with elder schoolboys. I was learned pingpong to middle school.
I wasn\'t smart and I liked going out play than study.
My college life just were soso. I played table tennis,meeting group and go to the trip.
Anyway my college times was difficult like a lamp lost road.
I was sick shen my young times. And I wasn\'t a dynamic life. I was a lady a lot of thinking.
I dislike go out far from my house alone. Only I like go to the trip with my family.
I always need to bodyguard. I know I need to standing alone too.
My husband made me dependent woman to him. He was anything instead me.
My childhood, grandmother always got my side between siblings when my family lives with grandparents.
Because I was weak. I live depending to somebody in all life.
Good night Gabby.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Great job! It was truly a memorable experience.
- T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby.
>> Correct
You are asking about times I don\'t want to remember. But it\'s homework, so I\'ll do it.
>> Correct
You are asking about times I don\'t want to remember. But it\'s homework, so I\'ll do it.
>> You are asking me about something that I don\'t want to remember, but it\'s a homework so I have to do it.
I was happiest when I play pingpong with elder schoolboys.
I was happiest when I play pingpong with elder schoolboys.
>> I was the happeiest whenever I play pingpong with the elder schoolboys.
I was learned pingpong to middle school.
>> I learned pingpong when I was in middle school.
I wasn\'t smart and I liked going out play than study.
I wasn\'t smart and I liked going out play than study.
>> I wasn\'t smart and I only like going out to play than study.
My college life just were soso. I played table tennis,meeting group and go to the trip.
My college life just were soso. I played table tennis,meeting group and go to the trip.
>> My college life we just not so good. I just played table tennis, meeting group and go on some trips.
Anyway my college times was difficult like a lamp lost road.
Anyway my college times was difficult like a lamp lost road.
>> Anyway, my college days were difficult and it\'s like a lost road.
I was sick shen my young times. And I wasn\'t a dynamic life.
I was sick shen my young times. And I wasn\'t a dynamic life.
>> I was sick back then and it wasn\'t a dynamic life.
I was a lady a lot of thinking.
>> I was a lady who thinks a lot.
I dislike go out far from my house alone. Only I like go to the trip with my family.
I dislike go out far from my house alone. Only I like go to the trip with my family.
>> I dislike going out alone and I just want to go out with my family.
I always need to bodyguard. I know I need to standing alone too.
I always need to bodyguard. I know I need to standing alone too.
>> I always need a bodyguard but I know I have to be alone too.
My husband made me dependent woman to him. He was anything instead me.
My husband made me dependent woman to him. He was anything instead me.
>> I am too dependent with my husband. He was everything and not me.
My childhood, grandmother always got my side between siblings when my family lives with grandparents.
My childhood, grandmother always got my side between siblings when my family lives with grandparents.
>> My grandmother was always on my side.
Because I was weak. I live depending to somebody in all life.
Because I was weak. I live depending to somebody in all life.
>> I was weak so I live a life that\'t too dependent to someone else.
Good night Gabby.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.
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