My comfort food

2021-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My comfort food is shabu shabu. My favorite too. It\'s main of vegetable and when I eat the shabu shabu my stomach feel so comfortable. I eat so much that I don\'t feel bad even if I\'m full. Because it\'s very mild and warm food.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

I love shabu-shabu too! It\'s one of my favorite dishes as well. We usually eat it every December.

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My comfort food is shabu shabu.

>> CORRECT

My favorite too.

>> It is my favorite too.

It\'s main of vegetable and when I eat the shabu shabu my stomach feel so comfortable.

>>> It\'s mainly vegetables and when I eat it, my stomach feels very soothed.

I eat so much that I don\'t feel bad even if I\'m full.

>> CORRECT

Because it\'s very mild and warm food.

>> It is because it is very mild and warm.

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