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Now I work for Samsung electro mechanics in Suwon. 

>> I am working now for Samsung Electro Mechanics in Suwon. 

The company is located in Suwon. 

>> CORRECT!

Suwon is close nearby Seoul. I takes about 1 hour by car. 

>> Suwon is nearby Seoul, it takes about 1 hour by car to go there. 

I work in a RnD department for mobile camera module. 

>> I work in an RnD department for a mobile camera module. 

This is only for the camera module department. And there is some office building. 

>> This is only for the camera module department and there are some offices in the building. 

You entered the office area, you can see the so many desk and chairs. And in front of chairs, personal computer. 

>> Once you enter the office area, you will see many desks and chairs, and in front of the chairs are personal computers.

Some area is test room for research and development some area is meeting to have conference 

>> Some areas are the test rooms for research and development, some areas are for meetings or for conferences.

There are 2 toilet side of office. 

>> There are two toilets in the side of the office.

Our cafeteria is another building.in 1st floor. 

>> Our cafeteria is on the first floor in another building.

When I come this company, First image of this company is large company and well organized. 

>> When I first came to this company, the first image on my mind is that this company is large and well organized. 

So there are so many peoples engaged in this company about 50000 employer and engineer involved this company and 

>> There are so many people engaged to this company, there are about 50,000 employees and engineers involved in this company.

there are so many department for example production team , finance team , and HQ area.

>> There are so many departments, for example. the production team , finance team , and HQ area.