My company significant event is a new year ceremony.
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What are the most significant events in your company?
My company significant event is a new year ceremony. Before Covid-19 beginning of the year we had a ceremony for new year. There is a celebration speech of CEO. And CEO told about important events of that year. And CEO told us about last year performance. And additionally there were an award ceremony to best member of last year.
I think that ceremony is important event of my company.
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Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. Being recognized and acknowledged for one\'s work is a good reward for employees.
- T. Beth
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My company significant event is a new year ceremony. >>>> My company\'s most significant event is the New Year ceremony.
Before Covid-19 beginning of the year we had a ceremony for new year.
>>>> Before the Covid-19 pandemic at the beginning of this year, we had a ceremony for the new year.
There is a celebration speech of CEO.
>>>> There is a celebration speech by the CEO.
And CEO told about important events of that year.
>>>> The CEO talked about important events of that year.
And CEO told us about last year performance.
>>>> And the CEO told us about last year\'s performance.
And additionally there were an award ceremony to best member of last year.
>>>> In addition, there was a n award ceremony for the best employee of the year.
I think that ceremony is important event of my company.
I think that ceremony is important event of my company.
>>>> I think that ceremony is the most important event of my company.
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