My country
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My country is Korea. Korea has three sides of the sea. There are four distinct seasons and Kimchi Hanbok idol group is famous around the world.
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Good afternoon [이름]! Writing widens your knowledge and imagination. Keep it up!
~Teacher Aki :)
My country is Korea.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am from South Korea.
Korea has three sides of the sea.
>> South Korea has coast line along three seas.
There are four distinct seasons.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are four distinct seasons, namely; winter, spring , summer and fall
and Kimchi Hanbok idol group is famous around the world.
>> Kimchi, Hanbok and the Idol groups are famous around the world.
~Teacher Aki :)
My country is Korea.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am from South Korea.
Korea has three sides of the sea.
>> South Korea has coast line along three seas.
There are four distinct seasons.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are four distinct seasons, namely; winter, spring , summer and fall
and Kimchi Hanbok idol group is famous around the world.
>> Kimchi, Hanbok and the Idol groups are famous around the world.
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