My country!!
학생이 쓴 원문
My country has more old people and fewer young people than 5 years ago. We have more exchanges with foreign countries, and the Korean Wave has spread a lot abroad. Our country\'s science and technology has also developed a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
My country has more old people and fewer young people than 5 years ago.
>>> CORRECT!
We have more exchanges with foreign countries, and the Korean Wave has spread a lot abroad.
>>> CORRECT!
Our country\'s science and technology has also developed a lot.
>>> Our country\'s science and technology have also developed a lot.
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