My country products.
학생이 쓴 원문
My country is popular for semiconductor, for buisness. And Korea cellphone and notebook.(that is kind of phone.) Korea built tower and bridge in other countries. So Korea\'s construction is good.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for your answer to the homework. I agree that Korea is popular for its semiconductor industry as well as electronics. I am a fan of Korean electronic products. They are more affordable and convenient to use.
--Teacher Anji
My country is popular for semiconductor, for buisness. And Korea cellphone and notebook.(that is kind of phone.)
>> My country is popular for semiconductor business, ,and Korean cellphone and notebook, which is a kind of phone.
Korea built tower and bridge in other countries. So Korea\'s construction is good.
>> Korea has built towers and bridges in other countries, so Korea\'s construction is considered good.
>> My country is popular for semiconductor business, ,and Korean cellphone and notebook, which is a kind of phone.
Korea built tower and bridge in other countries. So Korea\'s construction is good.
>> Korea has built towers and bridges in other countries, so Korea\'s construction is considered good.
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