My countryside is....
학생이 쓴 원문
My countryside is small and quiet but not uncomfortable.
I like the countryside because it is beautiful and there is fresh air.
And there is no traffic jam.
I love this place, which is not big and beautiful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
We should always be thankful for simple things and places.
I appreciated the reminder here.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My countryside is small and quiet but not uncomfortable.
>> Correct
I like the countryside because it is beautiful and there is fresh air.
I like the countryside because it is beautiful and there is fresh air.
>> I like the countryside because it is beautiful and the air there is fresh.
And there is no traffic jam.
And there is no traffic jam.
>> There is also no traffic jam.
I love this place, which is not big and beautiful.
I love this place, which is not big and beautiful.
>> Correct
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