My daily routine{03/02}
학생이 쓴 원문
My daily routine is dense.
Everyday, except for Friday, I go to the academy.
This is my daily routine.
This article shows that I like to study.
I love study and reading!!!
-The End-
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~
My daily routine is dense.
>> My daily routine is hectic.
Everyday, except for Friday, I go to the academy.
>> Everyday, except on Fridays, I go to the academy.
This is my daily routine.
>> correct
This article shows that I like to study.
>> This composition shows that I like studying.
I love study and reading!!!
>> I love studying and reading!!!
-The End-
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