My daily routine
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually get up at 9 am. but I don’t eat breakfast. Most of time, I study useful skills to find job such as computer skills. but when I take a rest, I play games for about 1 hour. I consider my health, so I’m trying not to eat after 8 pm. Originally, I went to the fitness center to exercise 3 times a week, but not now. but I’m planning to go to the fitness center again next week because I got weight after recent trip abroad. So my goal is loosing 3kg.
강사 첨삭
Hey Iris! I think that would be an awesome goal. I know how difficult it is to lose weight and I am rooting for you in your journey of losing 3kg soon. Keep me updated!
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I usually get up at 9 am. but I don’t eat breakfast.
>> CORRECT
>>> I usually get up at 9 am , but I don\'t eat breakfast.
Most of time, I study useful skills to find job such as computer skills. but when I take a rest, I play games for about 1 hour.
>> Most of the time, I study useful skills to find a job such as computer skills, but when I take a rest I play games for about an hour.
I consider my health, so I’m trying not to eat after 8 pm.
>> I\'m considering my health, so I try not to eat after 8 pm.
Originally, I went to the fitness center to exercise 3 times a week, but not now.
>> Originally, I used to go to the fitness center 3 times a week.
but I’m planning to go to the fitness center again next week because I got weight after recent trip abroad.
>> I\'m planning to go to the fitness center again by next week because I gained weight after my recent trip abroad.
So my goal is loosing 3kg.
>> So my goal is to lose 3 kg.
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