My daily schedule

2010-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I am going to tell you my daily routine in weekdays. I get up at 6:45 in the morning. and wash my face and hair. Then, I go to work. Before going to an office, I go to the restaurants to get some meal. Our company's restaurant serves the packaged meal like a sandwich for busy employee. When I arrive at an office , I eat it. After then, I log on our company's website called "Single" and check my emails. and then, I am usually in charge of drawing mechnical things by a 3D program. and I get off at 5 P.M Most of the time , I get back to home soon and have a dinner.

강사 첨삭

[이름] my dear.. Got nothing to say.. Youre still the smart student I've met before. Keep up the good work.. Talk to you again later my dear.. T.Cam   I am going to tell you my daily routine in weekdays. >>correct!I get up at 6:45 in the morning. >>correct!and wash my face and hair. >>correct! >>and I take a shower.Then, I go to work. >>correct!Before going to an office, I go to the restaurants to get some meal. >>correct!Our company's restaurant serves the packaged meal like a sandwich for busy employee. >>Our company cafeteria serves a package meal like a sandwich for busy employees.When I arrive at an office , I eat it. >>When I arrive at the office, I usually eat it.After then, I log on our company's website called "Single" >>After then, I log onto our company's website called "Single"and check my emails. >>correct!and then, I am usually in charge of drawing mechnical things by a 3D program. >>correct!and I get off at 5 P.M >>correct!Most of the time , I get back to home soon >>Most of the time, I get back home soon.and have a dinner. >>correct! 

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