My daily schedule
학생이 쓴 원문
I am going to tell you my daily routine in weekdays.
I get up at 6:45 in the morning.
and wash my face and hair.
Then, I go to work.
Before going to an office, I go to the restaurants to get some meal.
Our company's restaurant serves the packaged meal like a sandwich for busy employee.
When I arrive at an office , I eat it.
After then, I log on our company's website called "Single"
and check my emails.
and then, I am usually in charge of drawing mechnical things by a 3D program.
and I get off at 5 P.M
Most of the time , I get back to home soon
and have a dinner.
강사 첨삭
[이름] my dear..
Got nothing to say..
Youre still the smart student I've met before.
Keep up the good work..
Talk to you again later my dear..
T.Cam
I am going to tell you my daily routine in weekdays.
>>correct!I get up at 6:45 in the morning.
>>correct!and wash my face and hair.
>>correct!
>>and I take a shower.Then, I go to work.
>>correct!Before going to an office, I go to the restaurants to get some meal.
>>correct!Our company's restaurant serves the packaged meal like a sandwich for busy employee.
>>Our company cafeteria serves a package meal like a sandwich for busy employees.When I arrive at an office , I eat it.
>>When I arrive at the office, I usually eat it.After then, I log on our company's website called "Single"
>>After then, I log onto our company's website called "Single"and check my emails.
>>correct!and then, I am usually in charge of drawing mechnical things by a 3D program.
>>correct!and I get off at 5 P.M
>>correct!Most of the time , I get back to home soon
>>Most of the time, I get back home soon.and have a dinner.
>>correct!
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