My daily work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [Name]!
Thank you for today! And I would like to congratulate you for passing your promotion exam.
Though you doubted yourself and screwed up, you were still able to overcome it.
God moves in mysterious ways as they say. He gave you a second chance so you better do very well.
Good luck in your interview.
See you tomorrow and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
In order to receive good feedback from my customer, I have to be kind in every situation when they complain about the inspection fee is too expansive and when they complain about why we have to receive such a unnecessary things.
>> In order to receive a good feedback from my customer, I have to be kind in every situation like when they complain that the inspection fee is too expensive or why do they have to receive such unnecessary things.
I am asked to explain the result to customers kindly and detailed.
>> I am always being asked to explain the result to the customers kindly and in detailed.
Since the head office give my customer call to check wether I did my duty kindly and explain the result to my customer well.
>> Since the head office gives my customers a call to check whether I did my duty kindly or if I explained the result to my customers very well.
If I get negative evaluation from the field. I will be in trouble during the personnel evaluation.
>> If I get a negative evaluation from the field, I will be in trouble during the personnel evaluation.
The C.S.(Customer Satisfaction) department give them a call to give them some question.
>> The C.S.(Customer Satisfaction) department gives them a call to ask them some question.
The questions is to monitor how well I did my work. The material used to be used during the personnel evaluation session.
>> The question is to monitor how well I did in my work and the materials used during the
So, I have to pay attention about getting a good reputation from my customer.
>> So I have to pay attention to build a good reputation from my customers.
I also have the authority to oder the elevator to be stopped in case of the situation when the elevator is not guaranteed about safety.
>> I also have the authority to order the elevator to be stopped in case where the elevator\'s safety is not guaranteed.
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