My dailylife.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is Tuesday today. According to the weather forcast. It will rain a day today. It\'s gloomy day.
My wife went to her\'s office at 8.20AM. And i took a walk with my father arround my aprtmen
T. I came to my home. And maked my coffee. I ground the coffee grains. Smell is very good. Most people like this smell. It\'s wonderfull that smell of grinding coffee. And i talked about our life -English in my class with Beth tacher.andthe
n, I had my lunch with my father. Menu of lunc
h are romen and rice cake.and I rested after lunc
h. I studied English to speak and listen. And I did
My computer\'s work for 2 hours.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing this Sir Ko. I also love the smell of freshly made coffee.
It is Tuesday today.
>>> correct
According to the weather forcast. It will rain a day today.
>>> According to the weather forecast, it will rain all day today.
It\'s gloomy day.
>>> It\'s a gloomy day.
My wife went to her\'s office at 8.20AM. And i took a walk with my father arround my aprtment.
>>> My wife went to her office at 8.20AM and I took a walk with my father around my apartment.
I came to my home. And maked my coffee.
>>> I came home and made my coffee.
I ground the coffee grains.
>>> correct
Smell is very good.
>>> It smells very good.
>>> OR: The aroma is very good.
>>> OR: It has very good aroma.
Most people like this smell.
>>> correct
It\'s wonderfull that smell of grinding coffee.
>>> It\'s wonderful, that smell of grounded coffee.
And i talked about our life -English in my class with Beth tacher.and then, I had my lunch with my father.
>>> Then we talked about our lives in my English class with teacher Beth. After that, I had my lunch with my father.
Menu of lunch are romen and rice cake.and I rested after lunch.
>>> The menu for lunch are ramen and rice cake. I then rested after lunch.
I studied English to speak and listen. And I did My computer\'s work for 2 hours.
>>> I studied English to speak and listen, and I did my work on the computer for 2 hours.
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