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I have to do my homework about korea history, but I couldn't. So I want to replace this one instead of my last homework. Today, I participated in the sports game by company. As this week was so tired and terrible, I want to take a rest, but I couldn't do that. During sports competition time, I participated in some games,whether win the game or not, it was so fun and good. I rarely do exercise, so I need some activities. After finishing game, I got a gift ticket.I'll buy something tomorrow. I think, I could discard lots of stress far away though this time.I'm happy now. I have to take a rest for tomorrow.

Happy Monday [이름]! I'm glad that you are actually indulging yourself to activities like sports.  This can help relieve stress and good for your health too.  See you! Monica   I have to do my homework about korea history, but I couldn't. >>>correct So I want to replace this one instead of my last homework. >>>So I want to replace it with this one.Today, I participated in the sports game by company. >>>I participated in the sports event held in our company.  As this week was so tired and terrible, I want to take a rest, but I couldn't do that. >>>This week is so tiring and terrible that I want to take a rest but I couldn't.During sports competition time, I participated in some games,whether win the game or not, it was so fun and good. >>>During the sports competion I joined some games and it was really fun whether I win the game or not. I rarely do exercise, so I need some activities. >>>correct After finishing game, I got a gift ticket.I'll buy something tomorrow. >>>correct I think, I could discard lots of stress far away though this time. >>>I think I could discard lots of stress through this. I'm happy now. I have to take a rest for tomorrow. >>>correct