My date was
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a blind date today. I met a girl at dinner. I had a dinner with her and drank a cup of tea. After that I dropped her home and I came back home. I think It wasn\'t well. I don\'t want to have a blind date again.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Thomas!
First of all, congratulations for being brave! Not everyone can go out there and risk dating someone they will meet for the first time.
I am still hopeful that you will try dating again but not blindly.
At least you were a perfect gentleman and put your best foot forward.
Excellent job in getting all of your sentences correctly!
See you in class soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
I had a dinner with her and drank a cup of tea.
>> Correct!
After that I dropped her home and I came back home.
>> Correct!
Or: After that, I dropped her home and I came back home.
I think It wasn\'t well. I don\'t want to have a blind date again.
>> Correct!
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