My daughter makes me feel happy
학생이 쓴 원문
I\\\'m always happy when My daughters is beside of me.. there is no reason
what we are looking our children is one of kind of happiness in the world
I hope what they are keeping beside of me when I die
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to read your feedback and to make this homework. This is quite deep and very honest. I appreciate it. This proves how much you love your family and I do hope they appreciate all the sacrifices you are making for them as well. Let\'s talk in class tomorrow. Have a good night. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I\\\'m always happy when My daughters is beside of me.. there is no reason
>>> I am always happy when I see my daughters and there is no other special reason than that.
what we are looking our children is one of kind of happiness in the world
>>> When we see our children, it is happiness that is one of a kind in the world.
I hope what they are keeping beside of me when I die
>>> I hope they stay beside me when I die.
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