My daughter’s lunchbox
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon.
I forgot upload these pictures.
I made snail Kimbob last week.
And I made penguin Kimbob this week.
Was it looks good? ^^
See you our class.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for this. Oh wow, they look so cute. They really do look like snails. Kids would love this. You did well, very artistic. It\'s actually hard to roll and keep the kimbap in shape. Even cutting would be tricky. Seeing that you were able to make this good shape, makes me think you\'re good at rolling kimbap. Well done!
- T. Beth
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Good afternoon.>>> correct
I forgot upload these pictures.
>>> I forgot to upload these pictures.
I made snail Kimbob last week.
>>> correct ( I made snail \'kimbap\' last week. )
And I made penguin Kimbob this week.
>>> correct ( And I made penguin \'kimbap\' this week. )
Was it looks good? ^^
>>> Does it look good?
See you our class.
>>> See you in our class.
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