my daughter went to the dentist.
학생이 쓴 원문
my daughter got hurt her teeth last weekend.
she slipped when she was seeing the cartoon.
so she was torn by desk her lips.
she was crying and we had a chaos.
i think it was our faluts that my daughter's accidents.
i swear that i'll take care of my daughter more all my heart.
강사 첨삭
my daughter got hurt her teeth last weekend.>> My daughter hurt her teeth last weekend.she slipped when she was seeing the cartoon.>>She slipped while she was seeing/watching cartoons.so she was torn by desk her lips.>>Her lips was torn when it hit the desk.she was crying and we had a chaos.
>>She was crying and we were in chaos.i think it was our faluts that my daughter's accidents.>>I think it was our fault that my daughter had that accident.i swear that i'll take care of my daughter more all my heart.
>> I promised that I'll always look after my daughter and take care of her.
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