my day
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a friend from Australia.
Her name is Katty.
She likes sports very,very much.
I often play some sports with her in our free time.
One day,I said,"Let's see a baseball game!"
But she said,"What is it?"
I was shocked at first.
But I learned that Katty has never seen a baseball game.
She said baseball isn't popular in Australia.
So,I got some tickets and saw a baseball game with her.
She said,"Wow,baseball is very interesting!"
I was so happy to hear that.
Next time I will see another baseball game.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
It\'s good to hear about your day.
Baseball is really an interesting sport.
Your sentence constructions are correct.
I just added some suggestions for improvement.
Have a happy weekend. See you on our next class.
__ T. JanE ^^ __
I have a friend from Australia.
>>CORRECTHer name is Katty.
>>CORRECTShe likes sports very,very much.
>>CORRECTI often play some sports with her in our free time.
>> I often play some sports with her during our free time.One day,I said,\"Let\'s see a baseball game!\"
>>CORRECTBut she said,\"What is it?\"
>>CORRECTI was shocked at first.
>>CORRECTBut I learned that Katty has never seen a baseball game.
>>CORRECTShe said baseball isn\'t popular in Australia.
>> She said \"baseball isn\'t popular in Australia.\"
>> or She said that baseball isn\'t popular in Australia.So,I got some tickets and saw a baseball game with her.
>>CORRECTShe said,\"Wow,baseball is very interesting!\"
>>CORRECTI was so happy to hear that.
>>CORRECTNext time I will see another baseball game.
>>CORRECT
>> or Next time I will see another baseball game with her.
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