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2013-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I have a friend from Australia. Her name is Katty. She likes sports very,very much. I often play some sports with her in our free time. One day,I said,"Let's see a baseball game!" But she said,"What is it?" I was shocked at first. But I learned that Katty has never seen a baseball game. She said baseball isn't popular in Australia. So,I got some tickets and saw a baseball game with her. She said,"Wow,baseball is very interesting!" I was so happy to hear that. Next time I will see another baseball game.

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Hi there,   It\'s good to hear about your day.   Baseball is really an interesting sport.   Your sentence constructions are correct.   I just added some suggestions for improvement.   Have a happy weekend. See you on our next class. __ T. JanE ^^ __   I have a friend from Australia. >>CORRECTHer name is Katty. >>CORRECTShe likes sports very,very much. >>CORRECTI often play some sports with her in our free time. >> I often play some sports with her during our free time.One day,I said,\"Let\'s see a baseball game!\" >>CORRECTBut she said,\"What is it?\" >>CORRECTI was shocked at first. >>CORRECTBut I learned that Katty has never seen a baseball game. >>CORRECTShe said baseball isn\'t popular in Australia. >> She said \"baseball isn\'t popular in Australia.\" >> or She said that baseball isn\'t popular in Australia.So,I got some tickets and saw a baseball game with her. >>CORRECTShe said,\"Wow,baseball is very interesting!\" >>CORRECTI was so happy to hear that. >>CORRECTNext time I will see another baseball game. >>CORRECT >> or Next time I will see another baseball game with her.

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