my day off
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually wake up at 10:00 am in my day off.
and I eat late breakfast with my family.
and I cleaning in the room or repair.
and I go to the suburb or take for a walk in the park.
강사 첨삭
A happy Tuesday to you Sir!
Thank you for spending some time making your homework.
I know that you\'re such a very busy man. I really appreciate your effort and I hope that you\'ll continue to do good.
Anyway, below are the corrections that I included. I hope that you\'ll review them.
Good night!
~Teacher Shanee^^_
>>I usually wake up at 10:00 am on my day off.
and I eat late breakfast with my family.
>>Another is I eat breakfast with my family.
and I cleaning in the room or repair.
>>I also clean our room and repair anything.
and I go to the suburb or take for a walk in the park.
and I eat late breakfast with my family.
>>Another is I eat breakfast with my family.
and I cleaning in the room or repair.
>>I also clean our room and repair anything.
and I go to the suburb or take for a walk in the park.
>>Lastly, I go to the suburb or take a walk in the park.
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